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A small god guided all over.
So great and fearfully made.
Just a stare at designed palms
I found a great destiny.
Under the rain;still fertile.
Oh! Optimist called it showers.
Hustling beneath the sun,
basking to a bright day.

Wait! Look at the mirror
Oh! how beautiful and charming.
Put up a smile and unveil
the mystery behind the history.
Now see the frown meant
for the days in wilderness.
I don't know who you are
but you are a rare gem.

------
oomph!


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by zaza

the little gods
Kneel not...
before small gods...

Why bring yourself down to their size?

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 22, 2013 )





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