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It was from some darker place,
I can not recall the days at all.
No sounds of laughter touch these walls,
but dungy curtains split in twos,
with colors faded, bright pinks and blues
and the fearful trimbling, I felt from you-
remembered and buried all so deep.
It gives me now, these things to keep.
Skips my heart a beat or two...
How to say goodbye to God...

If only to cut my arms and bleed,
and feel such pains of justice flow,
down like rivers from my soul.
I fear my death, I fear eternity.
Forgiveness some say, may set you free...
but who was I to know?

For with every reason, soft and clear,
without a feeling heart to hear,
every heart felt thought, to dust,
and dust to earth... dissappear.
How to say goodbye to God...
and how to turn around, from here.

David T. Culver

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The following comments are for "How to Say Goodbye to God"
by moonrising36109

Don't Be Afraid to Look at What You Fear
Isn't that what we fear the most...
Eternity and the Holy Ghost...?

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 20, 2013 )

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