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This days the route is so bad
Its perspectives might differ
but globally still same definition
Men fall off;some strayed
Many missing on fast lane.
My unique patient route
not so strong but rewarding

My decision;a step at a time
nobody holds it as I ascend.
Most times,it trembles to weight
Sometimes, so close to the top
then it falls and I restart.
The road to success is so bad
I happily took my strong ladder
It will cost a while;I will arrive.

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oomph!


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The following comments are for "Ladder"
by zaza

I Carry a Big Ladder
Just when you think it's out of reach...
the Soul steadies the ladder

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 18, 2013 )





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