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I have never seen a gutter
but drainage many times
where people are really refined
the aftermath is good times.

A cup half empty? Never ever
but half full cup of wine
though bitter,gulped smiling
Right before worries,I'm fine.

I have never seen a failure
awake three-sixty times before dawn
nor practiced ten thousand hours
but in his field a new born.

Have I seen mountains move?
Nah. But men reach its cones.
Made stumbling blocks materials
used in producing stepping stones.

------
oomph!


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The following comments are for "my perspective"
by zaza

stumbling blocks ... stepping stones
I think you should develop just this image into a poem of its own.

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: July 17, 2013 )

noted
@ poeteye thanks for suggestion. I would consider it

( Posted by: zaza [Member] On: July 17, 2013 )





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