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i was hung up on her
then she hung up on me
the man that i was for her
the guy that i used to be
was just not enough for her
and just take a look at me

now

i can count on my nose
and my fingers & toes
and that other lonely lone digit
the times we arose
faced each other and froze
then groped each other & did it

wow

it might be a surprise
that some of us guys

how

get some of our thoughts from above
because maybe while screwing
we're really accruing
particular thoughts from above

and we bow


------
J


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The following comments are for "hangup"
by mercer102

OMG! OMG! OMG!
Hey...
I've often found religion
between a woman's leg...
Some call it Pussy Heaven

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 15, 2013 )

legs
...legs

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 15, 2013 )





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