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i dreamed last night i
sampled a piece of sponge cake.
it was good and strange.

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The following comments are for "haiku sponge cake."
by johnjohndoe

Strangely Good Is Not Yummy
The obvious question here:
"Are you missing a pillow by chance?"

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 10, 2013 )

all my pillows are
present and accounted for (thank you for asking). This dream confirmed that not only do I dream in color but with a sense of taste as well. The cake, by the way, was not actually sponge cake but angel food cake baked in long narrow strips.

Thanks again for your comment.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: July 11, 2013 )

Now That's Food for Thought!
Just like smell is not an odor...
Our taste buds are in our brain

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 11, 2013 )

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