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Shocked to virtual-life with 300 prozac-watts,
deep in the frosty core
of a vast white-picket-fenced Hades,
this empathically radio-active spook
has launched a fur-flying black-data "blitzkrieg,"
thus exposing
uber-powerful under-worlds
to eye-dilating
newspaper sun-light
for the first time in decades
of darkly-lit vivification industries.

This Abominable Moscow Snow-Monster
has used his Frankensteinian might
to cleanly rend the thick-steel chains
of long-ailing, insincere alliances,
freeing the old dragons of Europe
to fly over their own psychic seas,
to discover their own brave modern worlds,
influenced by
but not vassalled to the American Super-State.

Oh, Abominable Moscow Snow-Monster:
What misty, indomitable eye envisioned you?
Could frame your thick, icicled, white-fur?
What greening-hand of mad Nordic scientist
Could sculpt your bony, primitive,
deniability-slashing claws?
Or conceive and manifest
your indie-edge night-shade-glow
B.S. sensitive goggles
(with mushroom-cloud mouse-scope?)
tell, Monster, tell

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by seanspacey

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Is abominable indeed...
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( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 5, 2013 )

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( Posted by: seanspacey [Member] On: July 7, 2013 )

of Big Sister
And The National $ecurity Industrial Complex Of Conga Dancing Snakes

Bolivia? Nicaragua? Venezuela?

..experience enjoyed

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: July 8, 2013 )

requests asylum in Russia.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: July 12, 2013 )

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