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there's someone whom i love
without whom i would perish
just knowing she's alive
is something that i cherish
without her i suppose
there'd be no lasting drama
or memories imposed
of talking cats and llamas
or, no, that's not quite right
it seems they were alpaca
and yes, we had a bite
quite rude, but right back at ya

she's something that i see
elusive, like a rainbow
she's someone that i need
but i forget her name now



------
J


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The following comments are for "alpaca"
by mercer102

Drama Is Not Play
There is everlasting drama...
At the end of the every play

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 10, 2013 )





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