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so much happens here in my little nest. my GF fires me, and i mourn. my friends were worried, thought i'd do myself, kept a weather eye on me. thought i'd crawl back to life, but then, of course, i met another girl. may i say that i still pine for x, the love of my life? but i was cut off without a sou, as it were. i kinda know why. it's little help that i gotta new kinda GF, let's say friends with benefits bet better than no friends at all, eh. new girl is hot, but difficult. ok, they're all problematic, i'm accustomed to difficult; anything w/ a pretty face is difficult. of course, i'm nothing to write home about. i ain't nothing but trouble, babe. i'm hemingway waiting to happen, i'm kafka in a box. i'm kierkegaard in a candy-dish. who's my little pet?


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