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it's really such a poor thing
when you're out to go morphing
from love to hate
from here to gay paree
jamaica's such a festivus
not so much for the rest of us
y'know if i ain't hadn'a
gone to freakin' canada
i think i'd maybe saved me mental skin
the whales up there in tadoussac
gave me a bloody heart attack
and hello baby, that's the shape i'm in


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The following comments are for "for wc"
by mercer102

Hate Is the Badge of Evil
How can hate be the metamorphosis
...of Love?
When Evil is the prototype for animosity...?

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 5, 2013 )

love & hate
oh, you'd be surprised

( Posted by: mercer102 [Member] On: July 10, 2013 )

Two Winks
Wink Wink

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 10, 2013 )

failed relationship. are there any other kind?

( Posted by: mercer102 [Member] On: September 10, 2013 )

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