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i said baby, you're tired, rest your head on my lap
she said 'kay, sexy beast, face-down or face-up?


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The following comments are for "face couplet"
by mercer102

Lap Joy
Approach unzippered passion...
In a face-down fashion...

And face up to the sexy beast...!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 29, 2013 )

sexy beast
ha! love it

( Posted by: mercer102 [Member] On: July 4, 2013 )

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