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Being good
couldn’t make me know
any better

I was harmless
they sold my name
and became
what I couldn’t

in the middle of daylight
I vanished like names
from voters’ list

with no difference
to who wins
or who loses

–R.K. Singh

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R K Singh


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The following comments are for "INDIFFERENCE ?"
by R.K.Singh

harmless
Not that it matters who wins or loses, but this one wins my approval. I'm not sure what selling your name refers to, but the feeling is certainly identifiably understandable. Good work.

( Posted by: poeteye [Member] On: June 16, 2013 )





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