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the night fever burns
like a molten Nintendo
still churning pictures

broken vessicles
endless like windows in a
sky-scraper forehead

another E.R.:
another poke, prod, snub, sneer,
dark gods in white-coats

vitamin C, lidocaine,
strange vivisection

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by seanspacey

A Vivisection of the Third Kind
There are those who speak
of strange vivisections

By dark gods in white-coat visitations

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 8, 2013 )

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