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Laughing having fun not caring
everything I'm not doing
but should
somehow it doesn't feel right
tonight I'll be alone
and I'll cry
I can guarantee that little fact
somehow another year has passed
it's my birthday once again
oh joy
another year older
another year closer to the end
of this amazing ride
blow out my candles
and wish with all your might
but when you open your eyes
it's all the same

~ Brandan Michael.

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The following comments are for "Birthday"
by fbomber125

Pay forward

I think you should go do something nice for someone unexpectedly, you will find more joy and be able to translate that into poems.

The poet should not be concerned with how he/she "feels" about life but instead reveal those elements of living, existing, sharing that make other "feel" in some way. That plus never write about birthdays.


( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: June 6, 2013 )

I do a lot of volunteer work, does that count? And I do get joy from that. Actually A LOT of my depressed poems now are written with feelings from the past. I'm quite happy nowadays. :)

( Posted by: fbomber125 [Member] On: June 17, 2013 )

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