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Unschooled blue cat's eyes
illumine the book-windowed
human heart study

Ivory dragon-flies:
Sakura hover above
the green human pond

Shelf-employed pictures
of perseverance, the rats
gnaw ambitiously

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The following comments are for "Kratom Haiku Set"
by seanspacey

Motivated to Chew
The trapped rat...
Impelled by a gnawing ambition...

Will eventually chew it's own leg off

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 27, 2013 )

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