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Monday, March 1, 2010, 3:07 PM, Central Time Zone, GMT

The Crash Site

Like the parting of the Red Sea, the crowd parted for the Boom-Boom Kitty vehicles, allowing them access to the alien vehicle. Working like fiends, Jason and his crew went to work erecting the temporary band shell, running cables, setting up generators and equipment. Matthew organised their security, keeping a careful eye on every move made by the military and the men in black.

Meanwhile, Jack, Carly, Mike, Arley, Tina, Asta, Penny and Mary, made their way to the door of the alien ship. Carly had Yelina's kitty in her arms.

Mike sighed. 'Okay, we're here. Now what?'

'I don't like this,' Jack said, looking around nervously. 'Why are they letting us do this? The army . . . the men in black . . . look at them. They've backed off, and how they're watching us.'

Mike took a look around himself, and frowned. 'Ditto. I don't like the looks of this.'

The five girls stood huddled together in front of the door. Tina, Asta, Mary and Penny were wearing their band costumes. Carly wore her official Boom-Boom Kitty cat costume and contacts.

'What do we do?' Mary asked. 'There's, like, no door-bell or anything.'

'Maybe they're watching us,' Asta said doubtfully. 'Do you see a camera or anything?'

'I don't see anything,' Penny said in disappointment. 'There's, like, nothing, except for those burn marks, from when they tried blowing the door up.'

'I don't think they're gonna come out,' Tina said with a resigned sigh. 'I think maybe we did all this for nothing- Hey! Carly! What are you doing?'

They watched as Carly made her way to the door of the ship. She shifted Boom-Boom Kitty to her shoulder, raised her hand, and knocked.

At the sight of the young girl approaching the door, all had become silent. She rapped on the door . . . once . . . twice . . . three time . . .

When nothing happened, she turned, and gave a rueful little shrug.

And then- the door opened!

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