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My top teeth rest on my bottom lip,
then I breath out a puff of air.
The next thing taking place
is my tongue moves to
just above my top teeth
and back to a small puff of air.
My lips touch to form the 'p'
and my tongue then presses
flatter on my roof.
I make a babies kiss,
and then half smile...

finishing off with a serpent's hiss.

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The following comments are for "What Happens When I Say 'Voluptuous'"
by ograd77

Now do,"Buxom!"

I really enjoyed following along with my mouth while I read this. It was like an Arthur Murray speaking class.

( Posted by: poeteye [Member] On: February 8, 2014 )

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