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My thoughts on going back to
reading was like breathing
yet shallow

Imagining I'd pick up a
Graham Greene
or something of the sort
and yet I never knew
how he writes

Maybe tomorrow
after I get my black hair back
will I start to flip
through the first pages
of Nono's Whitman

Or maybe when I spend
some responsible time
in the can.

ху да влипа ва'о ло ну да на влипа ло ну шухна

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