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So long, little red wagon
worse than the cracked path
worse than the lies
worse than the quantified
multiplied
horded and cultivated
distilled
finely tuned and targeted assault to my heart
that preceded
you

Proof positive of wicked souls
twisted notions
and that self-served frozen scoop
of sociopath sprinkled ice-cream
which you offered with a bit of love
propped on a promise
by which all messes are made

I'll never get this stain out





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The following comments are for "We all scream"
by rancidsauce

Conundrum of the Tarnished
For some stains...
There are no removers
Nor should there be

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: April 30, 2013 )





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