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Oh the hardest thing I've ever had to do
Oh, oh, oh losing you
As Im watching you walk out that very door
Oh, oh, oh what can I do

Knowing you were so untrue but still I grieve
Oh, Oh, oh as you leave
It all just takes me down to the very floor
Oh, oh, oh feel so naive

Love bleeds, Love bleeds
From your heartless deeds
Love bleeds, love bleeds
From all your vain misleads
Love bleeds, love bleeds
From your senseless weaves
Love bleeds, love bleeds
Leaving me on my knees
Love bleeds, love bleeds

Oh I believed in us, I believed in you
oh, oh, oh now all is blue
No I guess I wasnt really very clever
Thinking wed last forever

Love bleeds, Love bleeds
From your heartless deeds
Love bleeds, love bleeds
From all your vain misleads
Love bleeds, love bleeds
From your senseless weaves
Love bleeds, love bleeds
Leaving me on my knees
Love bleeds, love bleeds

Love bleeds, Love bleeds
From your heartless deeds
Love bleeds, love bleeds
From all your vain misleads
Love bleeds, love bleeds
From your senseless weaves
Love bleeds, love bleeds
Leaving me on my knees
Love bleeds, love bleeds


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The following comments are for "LOVE BLEEDS"
by MTMarshall

LOve Bleeds
Hi
I like this one for its simplicity and the way it sings. The repeated long vowel sounds are easy on the ear. I hear it as a rock sing! Cool! Good to read your work again.
Ken

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: April 6, 2013 )

LOVE BLEEDS
Thank you Ken... And you have a very good ear of course.... This is indeed a rock piece or at least that is how I heard it..

Fondly,
Teri

( Posted by: MTMarshall [Member] On: April 9, 2013 )





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