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Iím too tired here to even speak
Your words beside me still seeping
Ripped me wide open with deceit
And bleeding, yes bleeding me
Bone dry, bone dry as all hell
Canít you tell a shadow canít tell
Nor say farewell, nor say farewell
Just canít break this spell

Feeling the gray skies at my feet
Lost in a bleak pile of debris
Relentlessly vicious no doubt
Your gift an empty well I see
In hell, in hell left to dwell
Canít you tell a shadow canít tell
Nor say farewell, nor say farewell
Just canít break this spell

When an uninviting darkness came
A love so cold; so hard as stone
Only a broken heart to reap
In this prison cell to the end
In motel hell that's where I fell
Canít you tell a shadow canít tell
Nor say farewell, nor say farewell
Just canít break this spell


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