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four
drops of blood
fell on the white linen
the first drops
of many more to come
from my bleeding body

soon
the flowing blood
will spill
over myself
staining me
in red

red
was the colour
of my torn heart
when you placed it
on my hands

goodbye
you only said
not wanting to
spend more words
on my worthless self

hate
you i did not
i only pitied you
for i knew that
although my heart was

torn
you sold your
heart willingly
in this cruel world
for a piece of bought
happiness


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