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So then
so many miles away
and yet so close
to where my heart lies
how could this be
such feelings for someone unknown
is it a foolish love
something kids feel
that they call love
or something so alien
so deep,so strong
something i cannot put
in words of man

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by northerain

love it...

( Posted by: larryta4 [Member] On: July 10, 2003 )

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