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another chance
to heal this world
another branch
to grow stronger than
another reflection of
you in the mirror and
i shall not
be afraid because
Lord all things
are for my good
another chance
to grow stronger than



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The following comments are for "To Grow Stronger Than"
by FireFly747

cyclical.
Hi, i dont know if it was your intention, but the poem could be very cyclical. I had difficultly understanding n placing the last 2 sentences, but if u connect them with the top n re read the whole thing in a circular way it works nicely> just a thought.

( Posted by: Shaza89 [Member] On: March 12, 2013 )





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