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While still supping, Zeus
bombed the Urals to help man
off his hubris whorse

Dapper young zombies
roam our book-malls, skimming the
tome-tombs and talk-heads

Far as rolls the eye
hails not Caesar nor Jesus,
but bastard King Puck

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The following comments are for "Ativan Haiku Set"
by seanspacey

The experiment worked well
I love these for the way they use words. What matter they span from Greek mythology to mall zombies to Shakespeare? No, wait, I love that too. Bravo!

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: February 19, 2013 )

thanks PoetEye
Thanks PoetEye!

( Posted by: seanspacey [Member] On: February 21, 2013 )

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