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This poem has
No butterflies in it,
No search for love,
No talk of death.

This poem has
No flowers in it,
No words that rhyme,
Or, are hard to digest.

This poem has
No sorrow in it,
No Christmas joy,
Only a few chosen words,
And none of them,
Brand new.

This poem has
No theme in it,
Only seamless thoughts
With aimless plots,
That will lead it's readers
Into a world full of
Total chaos.

This poem has
No age in it,
Even right now,
As it's being born.

This poem has
No thoughts of war
In it, with no real future,
Yet, for a little bit longer,
This poem must go on.

This poem has
No fame in it,
And, no money, too!
Because this poem
Has no sense in it,
Hey, your reading it,
I don't have to tell you.

This poem only
Has me in it,
That is,
Unless you want
To join me, too!

This poem has
No end to it,
But, I must finish it,
Even if,
It is the last thing
That I do.

Now this poem
Must end here,
This poem must
Wish you
Well, thank you all
For reading this poem
And I hope that you
Thank me
For writing it, too!

Ronald Peter Ciras

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by moroccanron

Sure! Thanks
Of course you realize the poem has in it what you deny.

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: January 26, 2013 )

Poetry Out of the Box
Can there ever be a Modern era
Free from the trappings of tradition...?

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: February 5, 2013 )

Modern Poetry- My Comments
Your poem has every good thing in it
I loved each and every line deeply
Your poem is very soothing and fine
Please accept my best wishes dear.


( Posted by: mvvenkataraman [Member] On: March 8, 2013 )

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