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Hold tight now as we glide above the night-gray slates of village rooftops.
Look into the chambers, where in creased-pyjama beds,
The sleeping, wrinkle the sheets in unconscious feats of love and derring do.

Through this window, see the landlord deep in his beer-stained dream,
Pull a pint using his wife's sleeping arm, and shout 'last orders'
Right into the face of a three o' clock clock.

Quiet now, and listen to the threats of the cowboy, who hunts for outlaws
In the velvet grasses and pine smelling playground of forests,
That nurture the young minds of invented play.

Watch as the vicar passes out bread and fish to his parishioners,
Snoring a sermon of Godliness as he blesses
The multitude on an unknown, rock-scattered mount.

In this house of ill repute, the village whore dreams of
New 'leopard skin' shoes, from under her purple satin sheets
As she reaches a lifeless arm, feels for the money on her bedside table.

In the graveyard the 'duty ghost' fights to stop the wind
From lifting her trick-of-the-light gown; exposing her underwear
To the late-night drinker and slinking, graveyard cat.

Do you love the way the flint of the chapel glints in a moonlight shaft?
Can you hear the silent screams, under the mounds of new flowers?

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The following comments are for "The Dream Watchers"
by ograd77

I liked this very much, if im not mistaken, it begins as a dream, gliding over the tops, and then i love these snapshots of human momments and emotions which the protagnoist sees, more in a spiritual way than merely physically.
The "slient screams" i think also gives much indication to what the poem is about...mabye about new souls coming onto an earth which has a sinster emotional experience buffet , encountered when being born into the human species, who seeks wordly power and social order, when infact true order and beauty are already present in nature's order of things.

( Posted by: Shaza89 [Member] On: January 12, 2013 )

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