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I need a cup of coffee,
To wash my sleep away.
I am at the Blue Moon Diner,
I am here to start my day.
The bacon here is sizzling,
And the eggs are tasty, too!
I watch my waitress bring me
My bacon, eggs and buttered toast.
I am at the Blue Moon Diner,
Having a better day than most.

I am here for the pleasant conversations
And for the beautiful women who
Look my way.
I am drinking my hot coffee,
And reading the newspaper
At the same time,
The morning sun is breaking through,
And now,
I am feeling pretty fine.
Here comes my waitress,
Giving me my bill,
It is my time to pay her,
And pay her forever,
I will.
I am at the Blue Moon Diner
Having a better day than most.

Yes, I am having a better day than most.

------
Ronald Peter Ciras


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The following comments are for "Blue Moon Diner"
by moroccanron

Good for you!
Don't forget to leave a nice tip!

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: November 16, 2012 )

I Read the News Today...O'boy
Life does exist...!
At the Blue Moon Diner
Living out the stories
Not found in a
...newspaper...!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: November 21, 2012 )





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