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I thought litorg had crashed out and died
but wait... a few oldies I suddenly spied
The web is so busy it's hard to keep track
which ones will leave without looking back
being good at goodbys it's not hard to tell
if I just say piss off or go pluck yourself

Then to put it in verse and twist it around
they soon get the point or so I have found
The Voyeur Brigade they will always be back
here to read others wont join in the crack
I once got the boot when my knife hit the spot
then sailed on regardless I know what is what

Joined in for fun won't hide where I've been
I can laugh at rants from the old drama Queen
Love life and fetish some pulling their own
life's greatest adventure sat on the throne
Stories and fiction they are all written here
some none de plume which I find rather queer

The end of our real world for better or versed
should it end in December on the twenty first
Just put pen to paper and pray tell us all why
this Mayan world will unfold or Pie in the Sky
Then on Christmas day there will be no applause
if presents are missing just like Santa Clause

An advanced Merry Christmas.... Just in case

If you listen to me long enough I can lower your IQ

I came into this world with nothing,
through careful management I've got most of it left.

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The following comments are for "The End of Our World"
by Fairplay

World's End???
End of the world
End of Lit
End of everything
ever writ'

ending too?
What will poets
find to do.

I'm sure the end
will come some day
but until then
I'll have my say.

Although an ocean
keeps us apart
thoughts twixt us
themselves impart.

So the if the end
seems very close.
Probably best
that I end this post!


( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: October 24, 2012 )

Some things will never end!
If the world ends tomorrow
Will I be sad
Or curse the God's
And really be mad!
Who can I rant to
When my world's undone
Or where can I post
To roast someone?
My dear friend Ivor
I'm sure you and me
Will be Rhyming in sync
Wherever we'll be
After Ten years of dueling
Words and rermarks
Has surely left
A secure place in our hearts!

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: October 26, 2012 )

Mars a Rockin'
Rockin' and Rollin'
while rhyming with rythmn,
I'm sure at words end
all will be forgiven.
As our astra bodies
join those of the stars
to bring rhyming poems
to planets like Mars.

They say the red planet
has seen better days
but its dusty old mountains
may sing in new ways,
with nonsense and rythmn
that rise through its dust
where old poets meet
to shake of their rust.

So be not afraid
of the end of our world
for it's then that another
may just be unfurled.
The things we create
in the depth of the mind
will reach for the stars
where all knowledge is found!

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: October 27, 2012 )

Magnitude 7.7

Thinking in rhyme while BC Rocks
with underground plates a sliding
Could have been worse
the end to this verse
Would it given us a good hiding

Vancouver slept on every last one
half wouldn't know till morning
Not me this time
I'm feeling fine
Should we all now heed the warning

There are no bells or whistles
take cover and hold on tight
Could be any day
work rest or play
Be ready for an unholy fright

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: October 28, 2012 )

Life still goes on

Life still goes on but not without fun
another earthquake where nobody run
In fact it went off and very few knew
a six point something magnitude drew

Though no big waves had landed ashore
with the quiet ones you can't be sure
It's the beginning of one that may send
collateral damage that none can mend

Fingers crossed while a lifetime goes by
if near to the end maybe I shouldn't cry
Been there before and watched a life close
while I sought answers that nobody knows

Day by day life is the best one can achieve
take it for granted theres time to grieve
Never stop living or your life will stop
just keep on climbing right up to the top

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: November 9, 2012 )

The Zen of What
What else is there to know...?
Knowing what is what

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: November 18, 2012 )

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