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Better to go to a sacred place
And spend there some days
This will give Divine solace
Then, bliss, one can trace

God will never refuse mirth
As He only made this Earth
He is in charge of every birth
He will make living very worth

Simply pray to the Sky dear
God will send the needed cheer
He will eradicate every fear
And make peace erasing tear

God will remain always wise
And take a soul when it dies
He will provide a soul paradise
If it had made honest sacrifice

Please in God always believe
Remember him when you live
The best to all, you just give
All your faults, He will forgive.

mvvenkataraman





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