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Original lullaby for my babies -

Hush now, my sweet baby
it is time to welcome sleep
no more dreary eyes now
now we're counting fluffy sheep

You did so much learning
but its time to end our day
and think about tomorrow
when sweet babies get to play

dearest, oh my dearest
now it's time I tuck you in
close those little eyes now
so the dreaming can begin



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by kraziRenee

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