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I feel sick, thrust into a world of endless sleep
It rained the day after the fact
Fit my mood, perfectly in tune with regret
I've written so much to expel the pain
pukeing up the past
It relates so much to know that I hide from the world
I could say sorry a thousand times
It makes up for nothing
I'm still sick, like I always have been
For awhile I was recovering
Thought I may have lifted the curse
It's still there
And I'm still slumped down in the chair with my puke bucket on the floor

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The following comments are for "Sick"
by Bleed

Thanks very much for giving me some insight on grammar....I hate it..I usually just write and say to hell with it.
As for my topic...yeah it is a state of mind. I was also trying to explain how for me, being emotionally tortured and depresse, my mind tricks me into thinking I'm sick. I feel like shit every morning. Just starting a new day is rough. I don't think people realize that when your stressed out your body reacts. Sometime's it's worse for others.
Thanks for the input...I plan on brushing up on the good ol grammar skills.

( Posted by: Bleed [Member] On: August 23, 2001 )

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