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They say my birth was a heavenly event:
here I am suffering third rate villains
that erect walls to stop the chariots
from Merkaba: the angels fume but who cares
heaven is a mirage in human zoo


R K Singh

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The following comments are for "ANGELS FUME"
by R.K.Singh

heaven is a mirage in human zoo

I reckon you are absolutely correct'

Life is a dog eat dog food chain

From day one (almost) you are in competition for food and attention.

Education is a necessity to climb any ladder in order to eat and survive.

Unless you are in a communist country or prison paid work is a scarce commodity which you have to compete/fight for,

Any God looking down and letting all this mess go on needs his head kicking in.

How many of you would just stand by and watch your own kids killing each other..... unless you hate your kids.

A nice warm church would be a good place for the homeless rather than people gathering to worship something that doesn't exist.....Humanity? I reckon most go only to gain Brownie Points or look good...... either that or they must need forgiveness.... wonder what dirty deeds they committed that they need to confess?

Lord we have erred and strayed from thy ways like lost sheep....... why blame sheep

I didn't ask to be born... and I certainly didn't ask to be born indebted for the rest of my life to any God..... My dog doesn't worship God either.

Load of nonsense... when you are dead you are dead forget the mirage

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: August 18, 2012 )

human zoo
I am glad I have a supporter in you for what I think. God is our helplessness though I always wanted Him to be my strength! And, living in a zoo, I have a tough time saving my own humanity, the innate goodness I am born with, like most others.
Thanks friend, for stopping by this one and recording your comments.
R K Singh

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: August 21, 2012 )

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