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This Road of Heaven
by FireFly747 (Member) - published: August 6, 2012
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Category - Poetry
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the jubilent sound of
soft white lilies
make a chorus of
iron gray
church bells
that sing out
in sweet unision
along this
road of heaven


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by FireFly747

snap shot
This poem reminds me of a little instant kodak foto,
Very bright, clear and immediately evokes feeling. :)

( Posted by: Shaza89 [Member] On: August 22, 2012 )





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