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Oh Ladies of Spain please don't falter
or hide cannonballs in your halter.
Don't fade or faint
or put on war paint
just because you're cuddled up to Gibraltar.

Oh Ladies of Spain please donít shiver
or tuck poison darts in your quiver.
The Rockís claim to fame
is now tired and tame.
No way can it stand and deliver.

August 3, 2012


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"Tigers bloom where there's oodles of room." Zodiac Zoo


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The following comments are for "Summer Silliness "
by Pen

It Sucks...... Pen





Haha Pen your Poem Sucks

I am sure you know what I mean ?????


but before anyone wonders why look at the link below



http://www.theolivepress.es/spain-news/2012/08/03/breastfeeding-awareness-event-planned-in-gibraltar/

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: August 4, 2012 )

amazing!
No! I knew nothing about this event in Gibraltar. Thanks for letting me know although .. I didn't know there were still babies there. Nice thought and simply love the serendipity!

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: August 4, 2012 )

Canon Balls!
I know it's not about that but...I feel like I need a breast reduction. It's just the way my mind works...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: September 7, 2012 )

Limerick magic
Hey Kaycee, nice to see you here! The suggestive quality of Limericks should make the mind wander off in other directions. Far too many of them are just obscene with no finesse. I like writing ones for agile minds like yours! Keep smiling.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: September 8, 2012 )

cannonballs
Fabulous!

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: September 8, 2012 )

yo Popeye ..
Hello my friend! Glad to see you're still here.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: September 8, 2012 )





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