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Oh so, so you think you know why
We live and we die
Is this heaven or is this hell
Can you even tell
The emptiness inside
And there's nowhere to hide
Touching jekyll and hyde
No you just can't slide

Oh yes, yes how far will you dance
A dream or last chance
Is it real or another lie
How far will you fly
In a vacuum worldwide
And there's nowhere to hide
See the world on its side
No you just can't slide

Oh did you ever really know
To stay or to go
Is it that ghost that you will host
How long can you coast
The hollowness beside
And there's nowhere to hide
Hear the tears cast aside
No you just can't slide


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The following comments are for "NOWHERE"
by MTMarshall

Nowhere
A cool bit of existential warbling. I would love to hear this one sung. Hard beat or a ballad?
ken

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: July 25, 2012 )

Stevenson's adjectives
I like the lower case Jekyll and hyde.

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: July 26, 2012 )





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