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This Time
by FireFly747 (Member) - published: July 24, 2012
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Category - Poetry
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to a broken love
uplift thy wings
to a broken dream
secure thy heart
to a broken promise
eyes that smile once more
do not quarrel
with love
this time


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by FireFly747

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Interesting poem here, enjoyed reading it.

( Posted by: literature [Member] On: July 30, 2012 )





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