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Fact of Life




Some will give life
some will take life
There's even some
that will give it away
I have my own life
carefully guarded
No matter whenever
work rest or play
Try to take my life
or that of my wife
I will end your life
for with it you pay


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If you listen to me long enough I can lower your IQ

I came into this world with nothing,
through careful management I've got most of it left.


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by Fairplay

Eric on life
If you wrote and posted this, it has to be because you didn't die of gunshot wound in a cinema in Colorado, eh?

I wouldn't mess with you or your wife...

But then again, I do not bear arms, so what could I possibly attack you with?

I know!

My worst-ever poems!

Lucie

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: July 22, 2012 )





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