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Who Cares Wins

Every time you loose you win
a chance to think again
Every time you win you loose
being just the same
So win or loose who cares
less you cheat the game

When you hit the bottom
stay or go back up
When at the Very Top
stop and have a look
Top or bottom who cares
whichever path you took


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If you listen to me long enough I can lower your IQ

I came into this world with nothing,
through careful management I've got most of it left.


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by Fairplay

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A simple little poem here ... what some folks declare is 'cheating' others believe is just being proactive.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: July 21, 2012 )

who cares
Only games have winners and losers.

I think it's about having fun and being happy without needing to play games...

Why is everything about "scoring" anyway? Why do we refer to situations as "win-win" or "lose-lose"?

Your poem says "who cares", and the answer should be "nobody cares".

However, the truth is that "everybody cares" because of this relentless pursuit of "outdoing" another...

I am not a player in this game.

It's an amusing game to watch, though.

Lucie

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: July 21, 2012 )

Loser or Winner
I've been to the top,
it's a long way to fall.
I've been to the bottom
then made the long crawl.
When you're hot you need cold
When you're cold you need hot.
You are always seeking
the things you have not!

Now Winners and Losers
are really the same.
It only depends
on 'your' rules for the game.
I've lost every battle
but still won the war.
Maybe by cheating,
but what are rules for!

But who really cares
which way the wind blows.
You can gain if you lose
if you're quick on your toes.
Defeat becomes Victory
I think you will find.
Loser or Winner,
It's all in the mind!

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: July 22, 2012 )

LMAO Ivor!
LMAO!!!

Ivor...You've ALWAYS been a winner in my book!
Soo happy to see you haven't lost your touch!!

Keep 'em coming my friend!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: July 23, 2012 )





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