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Thats the way it Goes

Itís yer 23rd chance an maybe perchance
yer will learn to keep it inline
On track in the back there's nay lookin back
with age overtaken by time
It seems funny with little or less money
the best you can do is just croak
Wid sum bint in the back takin all of the flack
why on earth is she stuck with a scroat
So if yer readin my heart has stop bleedin
the best years are down an gone south
All left to try is sum sad lullaby
while none wants to kiss yer old mouth

If you listen to me long enough I can lower your IQ

I came into this world with nothing,
through careful management I've got most of it left.

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The following comments are for "Statin the oblivious"
by Fairplay

First time I've seen one of these ... um ... 'hick' poems from your mind. Not sure if I like it much ... not enough of the clever for this to really be engaging. I like your regular lingo better.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: July 19, 2012 )
Election time South and looking at a couple of old geezers neither of which I would have dreamed would have a snowball is hell chance of fighting for control.

Maybe we could judge by first-lady The attractive 46 year old Yugoslavian v First-Man almost 70 year old (William Jefferson Blythe III) comparison.

Wonder what the spin-off will be here up north

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: July 19, 2016 )

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