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Blurring of words
takes place. Lead the light, O Sun;
non-path travelers are playing
an exotic game
in defiance and in delirium
of schizo-affective mind.

Fruits were fudging the flowers.
The parents. Walking alone,
watching the abasement of a
young pilgrim seeking the belief
of walls. The moon wears a death-cap.
It was the return of silky climax.

Do not move. Do not speak. Listen
to voice of stillness. World is becoming
proxy-keeper. The surrogates
were releasing the facts.

Satish Verma

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SV


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The following comments are for "TIRELESSLY"
by satishverma

Kaleidoscopic Poet





All the words are there.....

I took out the individual "Four Letter Words" and show them here in reverse order.

"Were move moon mind game path lead"

That was certainly "fudging the flowers" for me

Maybe a few swear words would have simplified things

Is it code for "The Big Bang" ???

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: July 16, 2012 )





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