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Death is not the easy door
the answers that it brings
Seen it opened many times
harps and chords n "Things"

Seen all the pain to get there
It's much better go to France
Just learn another language
maybe get a second chance

There's no angel's up in heaven
for who could pay their wage
It's you that has to do the work
not the butler or the page

There is no free lunch anymore
since you up and left your mum
You have that extra DIY task
master of how a life should run

Then dreaming ain't no crime
but dreams are for the living
When you're "Dead n Buried"
there might be no forgiving




------
If you listen to me long enough I can lower your IQ

I came into this world with nothing,
through careful management I've got most of it left.


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The following comments are for "Death is Not"
by Fairplay

Death IS for Dreams
Birth's the opening of the door
that death once took away.
Life's for the living not the dead,
its always been that way.

There'e no angel up in heaven
that will make you white as snow,
its when you're born again my friend
you get another go.

Your dreams, when dead, are all about
what your new life may bring.
And hope that this helps you forget
the truth behind death's sting.

For dreamin' ain't no crime
when dead it's all you do.
So enjoy the life you've got
for it's here that dreams come true!

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: July 14, 2012 )

I'm Dreaming of





Last night I had a wicked dream
not so sure that I should tell
Doing all the things I never do
case it means I will go to hell

Broke all the rules for living
had a right good laugh and time
Then all around were having fun
Holy Jesus sure that is no crime

See everyone was as happy as hell
in dreamland not breaking the law
We did as we pleased and were happy
I am sure that's what life is for

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: July 14, 2012 )





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