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The Mobile Moan

Convince yourself it's best
with communication so vital
To be continually in touch
can be just a wasted ritual
Battery must be fully charged
the contact list unending
Then who are we to worry
whatever needs defending

My sanity is keeping pace
world wide web unending
God created mobile phones
for mortals to befriending
My phone it does the lot
which is always far too much
It tells me where to go
just how to stay in touch

Diaries are kept in order
alarms warn and notify
It often makes me laugh
sometimes makes me cry
Apart from just the battery
it could do it all alone
Am I just a handy plug-in
for a wretched mobile phone


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If you listen to me long enough I can lower your IQ

I came into this world with nothing,
through careful management I've got most of it left.


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The following comments are for "Mobile Moan"
by Fairplay

world wide web unending
Smart phones intimidate me. I miss rotary phones.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: July 5, 2012 )

mobile moan
why are smart phones called "smart" anyway?

to me, it's like "gone viral": "gone viral" is a good thing, yet a virus is a bad thing.

My "dumb" phone rings. Or I press a button and it says "calling". That's it. I don't text. I don't get messages.

S2, L3: on which of the 6 days of Creation did God create mobile phones again?

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: July 7, 2012 )

Direct Line




Haha they have a direct line to your wallet or purse too....

Thanks for looking in Francisco and Lucy

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: July 19, 2012 )





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