HURTING DIVE
by satishverma (Member) - published: July 4, 2012
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As if pruning was not enough.
After severance from the peak,
the ladder was becoming
aloof and murky.

Acid burn on the day
of breaking confidentiality.
An imperfect mirror was
wiping out the cloud, all night.

You are going to take on the
starless sky. A moon was
left out in the stillness of black sheen.
You are now poking at the globes.

Give me a pen to lift the
remorse. I was desperate to become
human. Death was looking at me
with great amusement.

Satish Verma

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SV

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The following comments are for "HURTING DIVE"
by satishverma

taking a moment
Welcome to LitOrg which, in my humble opinion, is one of the better writer sites around even though it's been going through some doldrums as of late.

After reading one more well written poem by you I decided to check out your 'profile' which reads like you are full of yourself due to the way it's written. I'll put that down to a possibility of different cultural quirks which may very well be completely appropriate in your circles. Perhaps it was written by someone else? If that's the case wouldn't the author of your profile bio need to be identified?

I also congratulate you on your noble endeavors at the SEWA MANDIR FOUNDATION and would happily surmise you know much more about holistic healing than I do.

Now that you've taken the plunge, perhaps you will take some time to interact with other members here at LitOrg and employ some holistic principles here too?

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: July 11, 2012 )

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