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You and I, two disembodied spirits reaching inevitability,
climaxing into a naked singularity of genital bliss
and mind-bending
ecstasy:

our mutual, onrushing race towards a single, nuclear
peak of infinity and space-time pleasures hurls
our carnal spirits

of flesh and blood into a frenzy of love-induced
supernovas of nerve-tingling energy and violent
shockwaves,

which inexorably move along and ripple outward from
the epicenter of our conjoined spirits like waves,
seemingly painfully at first...,

then pleasurably at last with a breathless, intense
surrendering shudder of both of our beings
in synchronized unison--





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"Good verse, like art, is difficult."

--ngoc m. nguyen, aka "poembender"




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