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Growing Old

Rendered in cement for a smooth flat finish
this ain't no makeovers disguise
Forget the cracks and bricks that are broken
it's your own eyes telling the lies
Goaded old ladies with stories of heaven
lives lived in times long before
With modern wonder of truth that is hidden
not one will care less anymore

If you listen to me long enough I can lower your IQ

I came into this world with nothing,
through careful management I've got most of it left.

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by Fairplay

To Be or Not to Be

Maybe for lit.comments we could all have a preview comments rather than a Ban/delete Button... Scarey haha

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: July 19, 2012 )

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