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Monsoon
by R.K.Singh (Member) - published: June 29, 2012
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Category - Haiku
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sudden downpour--
waiting in shade for someone
with umbrella

--R.K.Singh

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R K Singh


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by R.K.Singh

monsoon
"shade": means there is sun, and not just an overcast sky with clouds.

Livens up this landscape.

Thank you

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: June 29, 2012 )

Singular or Nuclear





India you will be needing a Parasol and Brolley
weather changes so quick
Us Brits can be so thick
this bright spark is not quite off his Trolley

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: June 29, 2012 )





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