Losing
by Puck (Member) - published: July 2, 2012
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I love you, I miss you, and I need you.
You hate me, you hurt me, and you use me.
It is bitter but it is the honest truth.

It was me my, I should have given you more attention.
It was you; you should have never been so selfish.

Hoping for more and not able to see it is already over.
Playing game` s is what it`s called, that`s what you do.

I love you, I miss you, I need you.
You hate me, you hurt me, you use me.
It is bitter but it is the honest truth.

I thought I am the one who lost.
But the reality is different, you did.

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kissnick19@yahoo.com

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by Puck

It's Not Over till it's Over

Looser !!!

Quote "It is the honest Truth........"

Apart from the sharp intake of breath when you ask a mechanic how much the recent problem you have with your car is going to cost.....

I always think that statements starting with the above quote is automatically going to be followed by lies.

Ich habe einen kleinen......

I am automatically assuming the biggest looser was not the girl...

I also assume this was the intentional outcome for any reader

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: July 2, 2012 )

losing
In games, winners are happy and losers, unhappy.

I'd like to see beyond the end of this poem: into the happiness of the real winner.

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: July 7, 2012 )

Honest?
Like Eric said there are certain statements that have always be used when lying i.e.

With respect....... means I am going to be disrespectful!

Its a fact that........ means this could be disputed!

Honestly...........means you know somebody thinks you lie.

and definitively:

it's the honest truth......usually confirms its a definite lie!!!

I'm afraid that any of these statements either written of vocalized make me completely distrust everything then stated. With this in mind I can completely understand where this poem is coming from!

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: July 15, 2012 )

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