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talking to you the other day everything seemed to be o.k.,
looking at your picture in my head, seeing your smile.

Lightning, thunder, wind, rain - all seem` s to hit me at once,
no control, only fear - I wish I could disappear.

The telephone is ringing -should I answer?
Is there anyone out there who would really care to speak to me?

Talking to you the other day everything seemed to be o.k.,
looking at your picture in my head, seeing your smile.

Threatened by myself can`t even help,
this is a rescue call to them, to you, or maybe to me?

Hard to see in a room that is dark, hard to breath with no air,
they are taking it away from me without even knowing.

Talking to you the other day everything seemed to be o.k.,
looking at your picture in my head, seeing your smile.



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kissnick19@yahoo.com


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The following comments are for "Mask"
by Puck

repeats
I like the repetition you have. It is something we do, as humans, to ourselves -- we fret over EVERYTHING. Some people are very compulsive that way, others seem like nothing bothers them, but I'll bet they too have the repeating thoughts at times.

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: July 1, 2012 )





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