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Walked down a street knowing you are there,
Breathing, being scared it will stop every second,
Crying 'til all seems unreal to you,
Did you tell me to?
Did you want it this way?

Trying to open the door, but you have the wrong key.
Who is trying to fool me?
Is it you again??
Last night I was talking in my sleep.
Did you hear me?

Lighting a candle, but is too weak to light the room.
A baby is crying, where is its mother.
Did she forget?

It is raining blood, dark cold blood - Is it mine?
Am I real or is it ....shit, I really did it

why are you doing this to me?
Why are you doing this to me?
Leave me alone, go away.
Oh, no, it's just your shadow...


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